Iamsomesome1

This is a part of draft (This a different book) I was working on (not done) want you to check it. Your not obligated to do so. Here:
          Third POV:
          
          Midoriya hasn't been coming to class lately. Everyone is worried especially the Dekusquad. It just not normal for him to be absent.
          
          
          
          Uraraka POV:
          
          
          
          Deku-Kun didn't come to class nearly for a week. I know other people noticed but are silent about it.
          
          
          
          (Time skip to the end of the day cuz I am lazy)
          
          
          
          Todoroki POV:
          
          
          
          "Hey!" Uraraka said as she was running toward Iida and me. "Hey wait!" she said now panting. "What is it Uraraka?" I ask her. "Guys let's go see Deku-Kun it not normal for him to be absent" she pouted. It is true I have been worried and I am sure Iida is as well. "That's a great idea Uraraka but do have Midoriya's address," Iida said with the robotic arms of his.
          
          
          
          Uraraka POV:
          
          
          
          Iida hit me off guard. I haven't thought this through.(A/N English is such a weird language am I right)How the hell am I suppose to get his address not like I stalk him. That when it hit my head Bakugou-Kun and Deku-Kun grew together. He knows where he lived.
          
          
          
          Iida POV:
          
          
          
          As it seems Uraraka doesn't know where Midoriya-Kun live. She just stood there but then start sprinting. I faced Todoroki-Kun with a confused look he just shrugged. Uraraka came back a few moments later with Bakugou? "Uraraka where have been?" I asked. 
          
          She replied "Bakugou-Kun knows where Deku-Kun lives and he is willing to help."
          
          Bakugou POV:(Few moments earlier)
          
          I was chatting with shitty hair and dunce face when round face came.

FROOGYBEE

@ Iamsomesome1  hey :D, it's pretty good there are just some grammar Mistake. I will give you the edit tomorrow :) but I think the base is really good.
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Iamsomesome1

By the way I edited the chapter thank you for helping.
          I know it's much to ask but could you be like beta reader or commenter I am clearly bad at this stuff. 
          Again thank you<3

FROOGYBEE

@ Iamsomesome1  Sure it's fun
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