F_L_First_Last

I might do a rewrite on the DAL fic

F_L_First_Last

Should I redraft the OSHI NO KO fanfic to make it more coherent now that I have gain at least a little bit of experience. Or Just leave it as is?

Rin8491

Honestly, probably lol
            As much as I liked it, I had to do a lot of assuming some parts were a bit, incoherent and I didn’t really understood what was happening halfway through reading it
            
            Oh and the investigating the black company, not really sure what happened. Why does she not remember? What happened? When did she start taking the “pills” and when and how did she start/make the games when did she and just a lot of questions 
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