FabledFlowers02

To my readers awaiting the next chapter of my Kacchako book, I have a question: do you guys think I should rewrite it? And when I say rewrite it I don't mean the whole book, I mean important things such as moving the "kiss scene" further back to slow things down. Any opinions would be appreciated.

HiroshiSenpaiY

@FabledFlowers02 No problem, it's nice to see a writer on this site who is open to constructive criticism. I'm looking forward to seeing the revisions ^-^.
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FabledFlowers02

Oh thank you! I'm gonna go with my gut instinct then and rewrite because going back over it I've realised things seemed too rushed there grammar mistakes too. Thank you for your response and I'm glad you like my book
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HiroshiSenpaiY

@FabledFlowers02 When it comes to books that you feel need to be revised then I think it's obvious. If that feeling is there then it should be done. That's my philosophy when it comes to my own books. Just changing slight things and making dialogue edits are enough to make a good book a great book. But that's just my opinion. I love your book by the way.
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SolarTheSimp

Hello! My name is Solar ^-^ I read both of your BNHA fanfics and I just gotta say that I am mighty impressed! Both of em are very well written and I cannot wait for the next chapters.

FabledFlowers02

Hi, sorry for the late reply, thank you very much! I haven’t kept up with BNHA in a long time. I’ve had a lot going on in my personal life but I’m trying to catch up with the series. I’ll try and update as soon as I can! Thank you for reading! @SolarTheDaiyokai
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FabledFlowers02

To my readers awaiting the next chapter of my Kacchako book, I have a question: do you guys think I should rewrite it? And when I say rewrite it I don't mean the whole book, I mean important things such as moving the "kiss scene" further back to slow things down. Any opinions would be appreciated.

HiroshiSenpaiY

@FabledFlowers02 No problem, it's nice to see a writer on this site who is open to constructive criticism. I'm looking forward to seeing the revisions ^-^.
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FabledFlowers02

Oh thank you! I'm gonna go with my gut instinct then and rewrite because going back over it I've realised things seemed too rushed there grammar mistakes too. Thank you for your response and I'm glad you like my book
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HiroshiSenpaiY

@FabledFlowers02 When it comes to books that you feel need to be revised then I think it's obvious. If that feeling is there then it should be done. That's my philosophy when it comes to my own books. Just changing slight things and making dialogue edits are enough to make a good book a great book. But that's just my opinion. I love your book by the way.
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Jarrodactyl

You are on a writing spree. You disappeared for over a month, now all of a sudden you're back and publishing a billion stories hahaha
          
          YAY

FabledFlowers02

...yeah. Well I've been reading the Raven Boys so that put me in the mood to write I guess.
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therabidDogg

AAAAHHHHHH
          
          I  N E E D  A  M E D I C  B A G

FabledFlowers02

*hands you medic bag*
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Princesa_Yoonji

TMI and TID are the best!!

FabledFlowers02

I know right? I love the series so much and I'm so anxious for Cassandra Clare's new book
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Lolipoplips223

Lol, bleach is awesome! I automatically love you and the bleach ending I knowwww

FabledFlowers02

Yeah, the ending was a total bummer :(
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ajboudreau

@fabledflower02 u are a great Writer don't worry about people not like u books

ajboudreau

@ajboudreau no problem plus I'm a writer to we both have are up and down
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FabledFlowers02

Thank you, I think I'd like to take a more mature step in my writing now that I'm older and write up my own stories. @ajboudreau
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Ti_aaaaaa

@FabledFlowers02 YES GURL. Don't ever doubt yourself. You're brilliant!

FabledFlowers02

...
            If you read them, and realised how cheesy they are you wouldn't be saying that.
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Jarrodactyl

YOUR STORIES ARE SO GOOD

FabledFlowers02

You read them didn't you? I'm gonna kill you when I see you
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