Feeling pretty confident about Ties, although I'm honestly hoping for all kinds of feedback, mostly constructive. I'll gladly take all the criticism possible:)
Feeling pretty confident about Ties, although I'm honestly hoping for all kinds of feedback, mostly constructive. I'll gladly take all the criticism possible:)
Sup Lads, Lasses, and all of the above, or lack thereof
Feather Mass Update
Second, for Chapter One
again, I haven't really updated it for grammar, but if ya happen to spot any annoying grammar issues just let me know fam.
thx, enjoy if you do.
As if any of you lads and lasses care, you should read my new thing. called Feather Mass. Just a heads up; its unedited, and organized a little untraditionally. Within chapters, which only note the pov, there are... like mini chapters labeled, like First, Second.. and so on. Will update minichapter at a time... andd I hope you enjoy so far:)
Thanks and whatnot
Hey guys can you check out my chapter one for my novel Pink Grass Dreams its just the first chapter which is a flashforward. I included a foreword hopefully to explain any confusion. All i really would like is some feedback and criticism. Pleeeaase and thanks:)