FaceManThink

Feeling pretty confident about Ties, although I'm honestly hoping for all kinds of feedback, mostly constructive. I'll gladly take all the criticism possible:)

FaceManThink

Sup Lads, Lasses, and all of the above, or lack thereof
          Feather Mass Update
          
          Second, for Chapter One
          
          again, I haven't really updated it for grammar, but if ya happen to spot any annoying grammar issues just let me know fam.
          
          thx, enjoy if you do.

FaceManThink

As if any of you lads and lasses care, you should read my new thing. called Feather Mass. Just a heads up; its unedited, and organized a little untraditionally. Within chapters, which only note the pov, there are... like mini chapters labeled, like First, Second.. and so on. Will update minichapter at a time... andd I hope you enjoy so far:) 
          Thanks and whatnot

FaceManThink

Hey guys can you check out my chapter one for my novel Pink Grass Dreams its just the first chapter which is a flashforward. I included a foreword hopefully to explain any confusion. All i really would like is some feedback and criticism. Pleeeaase and thanks:)