FairyOfNight

@youngshinegirl sure....
          	

RishuRaj2

I m a bit disappointed with your story telling ....rather than using hindi phrases & Indian situation.....& translate it in English, conversing the Indian situation to US life thinking style...you should I think can write Hindi phrases in Hindi(you can translate it in English in brackets)...show Indian situation as emotional being...as we Indian are always emo..
          I don't know but somehow I didn't find your writing really related with your storylines...most of your stories are based in India...and an Indian guy/girl always thinking in English, speaking in english, hearing words around them in English, & even feelings are written in English...don't connect with what I see around my Indian society...
          I haven't read your stories full so I don't know whether your use Hindi somewhere in the ending or not... but I hope ur next story will get some Hindi wording..thx you...
          note_:- your writing doesn't seems to be girlishness.... make it a bit girlishness for making it better related with audience

FairyOfNight

@RishuRaj2 First of all, thank you for reading the story and taking time to help me. Actually, I live in South India and hindi is not as common here. I am way too much more exposed to English, that even my thinking process is in English. The characters in my stories are a part of me mostly, hence they are in English totally. Anyway I will keep all these in my mind while writing the next time, thank you once again :)
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ChanakyaKukkala

@RishuRaj2  being Indian are you ? :P
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