@poetic_athenaeum Hi! Of course you aren't bothering me! I just read a couple of chapters from your book. It's really good. Here is my honest feedback:
1. It's really inspiring. It makes me want to write a song or something. This is really good. This is how poems should be.
2. Your descriptions are really spectacular. Like, truly brilliant. You certainly have a way with words.
3. Edit. I know it's boring and seems useless, but even if you just use grammarly or ctrl+f (find)or check your capital letters are in the right place, it makes a huge difference. Btw, if you use find, search for words such as and or search for words you commonly use in your writing.
Anyways, it's really good! Bye.
