@danichecaa Definitely! I read the first chapter, and I really like it. You've got really good grammar and I could understand it pretty clearly. I added two comments suggesting a change in phrasing and punctuation, and if you'd like me to check for stuff like that throughout your story, let me know. If you want me to stop, you can tell me that, too. (: Thanks for asking me to look at it, I'm really glad you did. I really like the concept and it has a lot of potential. I'll be following it closely! < 3