She_The_Spooky1

Hello lovely! So I don’t usually do this type of thing lmao because it’s hella embarrassing but I really wanna get more reads, so I’m ✨shooting my shot!✨ So, go check out my Murder Mystery “The Death They Designed” my goal is to get 1k reads before the end of April! Thanks it  you do! (And I’m sorry for promo if you want I can delete this message!) ✨

purpleskiesanddreams

          
          Hey Stranger ✨❤️✨
          
          
          What does love mean to you?
          
          
          
          You might be interested in the book I'm writing. It explores baring your  soul to someone in hopes that it would lead to true love.
          
          
          I'll be posting chapters every Fridays so you'll always have something to look forward to.✨
          
          
          I hope you join me on this journey.
          
          
          Warning! You might just fall in love!❤️
          
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/346857364?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=girkwhoreads3&wp_originator=yL5Wl39DLlQZy8gh1S5kmm2CTYttgKloQIo83fpfhFDC437oFLW1M3I1JQePAHxOj0Wh5OAh3KbDedtyp4iIVFpy3T1xkMHxPpEa391fc5XJ%2BvZydKpduHaDn5vC%2F07C
          
          

dallas1213

Faithful_Teddy

@danichecaa   Definitely! I read the first chapter, and I really like it. You've got really good grammar and I could understand it pretty clearly. I added two comments suggesting a change in phrasing and punctuation, and if you'd like me to check for stuff like that throughout your story, let me know. If you want me to stop, you can tell me that, too. (: Thanks for asking me to look at it, I'm really glad you did. I really like the concept and it has a lot of potential. I'll be following it closely! < 3