PattieMchone
Im sorry I have to say I couldnt read anymore I think ur a ok writer but the way u wrote this really needs to be rethought out and rewrote u cant make her tough then a horny weakling to people who constantly beat her how does that make sence?? But good luck in ur writing in the future and please consider rewriting because it started out awsome but then went stupid kinda....please dont be mad at me I'm just stating my opinion..