FallenDeeply

EXCUSE ME MS. CAPAPATACITIES YOU SAY READ YOUR STORY BUT THERE IS NONE..... 
          
          Farmzooquarium I hope this is you otherwise I'm freaking some Random person out with my code words

@InsaneOutcast_ I read the first chapter of your story, and I think it's great!!  The details you put in were awesome, it was really easy to picture the scene of the story.  The only thing I would say, not that this is a huge problem, is just to make sure that your sentences and/or paragraphs aren't too long.  This way the readers don't get bored reading them or just skip reading them altogether.  Love it so far!! :)

@InsaneOutcast_ I would love to!  I haven't updated my story yet, but when I do, would you mind doing the same for me?  Thanks for the follow!