Doing some editing on early Our Tempered Souls chapters. Fixing grammar and spelling and adding some stuff. The main story will remain the same but continuity will get more clear.
Doing some editing on early Our Tempered Souls chapters. Fixing grammar and spelling and adding some stuff. The main story will remain the same but continuity will get more clear.
I'm delighted with your HOTD story, very original and not just another love story. Rhaella is like a combination of Joan of Arc and St. Olga of kyiv in a Targaryen. ✨
@Fingermonkey26 thank you so much that's very kind of you to say. I'm so glad that you've enjoyed the story so far and I really appreciate this message❤️ Rhaella is one of my favourite OCs that I've created and it makes me very happy that she is enjoyable to engage with.
@valisvaild1111 thank you❤️ I think his emotionlessness makes him more interesting. Taking away him being evil for the sake of 'babygirlifying' him seems like just creating a new character.
@FallenGrigori03 and I love how to describe Tom as heartless bc a lot of other authors sugar coat him in every single story.
In all your story is very realistic and that’s what I love about it!!
Rewatching my old edits on Tiktok has got me thinking about my Star Wars fic again (not posted on here but it involves Padawan Baylan Skoll) The parallels between Baylan's Master Daya and Anakin are going to be keeping me up at night I fear!