FallenJediMaster

Chapter 5 rewrite is finally out 

FallenJediMaster

Chapter 3 rewrite is out. Through im debating at the moment if any potential scenes need to be added or not

FallenJediMaster

Okay hope it works out well 
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OgnenVasileski

@FallenJediMaster I haven't started it yet but I'll try to do a small part of it right now.
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FallenJediMaster

@FallenJediMaster hows your next chapter coming along?
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FallenJediMaster

Chapter 2 rewrite is out

FallenJediMaster

@FallenJediMaster thanks its going to be great. 
            
            Okay
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OgnenVasileski

@FallenJediMaster Well, that's great. Can't wait to see the new scenes you've added.
            
            I was gonna show you a short about frollo today but it's too late so I'll show it tomorrow.
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FallenJediMaster

@FallenJediMaster great news chapter 3 should be put today
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FallenJediMaster

Chapter 1. Rewrite  is out. This may not be the finsihed product but i figure ive kept people waiting long enough that I felt like sharing what has been taken this so long. 
          
          Other chapter rewrites will come the following days. 
          
          I might go back tonight to add a few more scenes for this chapter. 
          
          But considered this a Easter gift. Happy Easter. 
          
          To answer a question that might come up some scenes that were the previous chapter 1. Will be rewritten into chapter 2
          

FallenJediMaster

@FallenJediMaster your welcome. Im happy you enjoyed it and im happy I was able to do it. It was nice to write even if a bit stressful at times. But I thought it was a nice way to say goodbye to the legion in a way. 
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BlackMoonOfDoom

@FallenJediMaster Amazing work on the rewrite and helping give my series the closure it never got
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FallenJediMaster

Okay everyone i have to be honest. Something that I realize recently.
          
          The reason its taken so long with the rewrite chapters is because im literally trying to go back and forth writing scenes that popped in my head. 
          
          Its not a good way to write a story. But I think it all falls now to trying to save the first chapter for last.
          
          When thats not a good method and I admit its not.
          
          I think once you see the first chapter. Your understand why its taken me that long to do it and why i keep dancing around it.
          
          I think if I focused on the first chapter solely right now. Ill be able to get it out today.
          
          That way I can focused on the other four chapters and release those after. 
          
          I think the truth is up until writing the multiverse empire. I usually dont stay on one story for long and staying on one story where people are actually reading it. Adds a level of stress. 
          
          So I need to go back to how I wrote my first chapter back in 2024. Calmly and just taken my time
          
          
          
          

FallenJediMaster

@FallenJediMaster well yeah it seems so. Sam is pretty well like in Hollywood. And as she said he allowed her improvise a bit at times. So yeah its not surprising she enjoyed working with him
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OgnenVasileski

@FallenJediMaster It's blatant false lies being spread about the movie, the performance and the behind the scenes in general. Everybody who worked with Sam Raimi has said so many great things about him and the way he handled his projects.
            
            Okay then. I'll be checking from time to time.
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FallenJediMaster

@FallenJediMaster thats fair she likely always enjoyed it and had stated it. Its just certain clips were taken out of context for types to use as evidence she didnt like it and they kind of spread around the internet. Despite her stance being a bit more complex than what they were claiming. Like with how some videos get taken it comes off like she didn't enjoy anyone behind the scenes. When its not true when she talks about Sam raimi amd how great it was to work with him. Yeah so I can understand how she feels about being taken out of context. 
            
            Okay it should be soon I promise 
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FallenJediMaster

Rest in peace Chuck norris

OgnenVasileski

@FallenJediMaster Well, there should be two options when there's an empty part of a chapter with no words written.
            
            A camera for pictures/gifs and the other is for videos from YouTube. You click the other, copy paste the URL from a video and and it will appear immediately.
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FallenJediMaster

@FallenJediMaster yeah at the end of the one chapter 
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FallenJediMaster

Okay big update. I know its been a while. But I have great news on the process of the rewrite chapters. 
          
          I belive the rewrite chapters will officially dropped some where on Tuesday or Wesnday at most. 
          
          I belive the date will be accurate. I might not have the best track record of chapter release dates. But I belive this where be accurate hopefully 

OgnenVasileski

@FallenJediMaster Okay then, I'll be seeing the post and I'll see which chapters I'll revisit.
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FallenJediMaster

@FallenJediMaster a few have. Ill put on my wall when their posted
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FallenJediMaster

Major announcement.
          
          I am reworking on some chapters as we speak.
          
          To best describe what i want to do. Consider some of the chapter rewrites as soft reboots. Not everything will be lost. But some things will be different but not too different 
          
          
          Just i want to add context and make things feel more consistent as possible. 
          
          So it means more scenes, more deeper plot points. 
          
          When I first started the second series. I felt rush on a level in the beginning and didnt have the full enthusiasm as i once did. 
          
          
          Trust me once I am done with the rewrite chapters I will let everyone know which chapters to go back and revist 

OgnenVasileski

@FallenJediMaster I'm already getting scenes in my head on what you're gonna be adding/changing but we'll see.
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FallenJediMaster

@FallenJediMaster thanks yeah im excited for it. I have some ideas what to change or what to cut back on. And who to focused more of. 
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BlackMoonOfDoom

Hi, friends! Crazy here, I'm back! I've found the passion again to write and am conducting something spectacular!

BlackMoonOfDoom

@FallenJediMaster i cant find you. reach out to me? if found the handsomeman one but not king
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