Fallenjewel

Hey guys.
          	
          	I know that it's been a while since I made an announcement, but I need your help.
          	
          	I need some ideas on how to rewrite No Longer Innocent. It's been a month since I finished and I  added a poll for you to decide if I should rewrite it or not and most are leaning towards rewrite.
          	
          	Also add the characters that I should include in the new version.

Fallenjewel

@ariainstars I understand what you are saying. I was 15 and read too many mafia books at the time when I started writing No Longer Innocent. So, Regina's age never really crossed my mind at the time.
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ariainstars

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@Fallenjewel if you're going to rewrite no longer innocent then **please** keep regina's age in mind as she was 17 and had 3 kids, was a hacker,an assassin ,a CEO, a street fighter and racer so i hope you make it a bit more realistic and less vulgar like ik Lorenzo fucked up but she was overall rude and please this time don't leave plot holes and i think you should keep all the characters as they were but reduce the amount of de luca brothers cause they weren't useful at all and js a stepping stone
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Fallenjewel

Hey guys.
          
          I know that it's been a while since I made an announcement, but I need your help.
          
          I need some ideas on how to rewrite No Longer Innocent. It's been a month since I finished and I  added a poll for you to decide if I should rewrite it or not and most are leaning towards rewrite.
          
          Also add the characters that I should include in the new version.

Fallenjewel

@ariainstars I understand what you are saying. I was 15 and read too many mafia books at the time when I started writing No Longer Innocent. So, Regina's age never really crossed my mind at the time.
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ariainstars

this message may be offensive 
@Fallenjewel if you're going to rewrite no longer innocent then **please** keep regina's age in mind as she was 17 and had 3 kids, was a hacker,an assassin ,a CEO, a street fighter and racer so i hope you make it a bit more realistic and less vulgar like ik Lorenzo fucked up but she was overall rude and please this time don't leave plot holes and i think you should keep all the characters as they were but reduce the amount of de luca brothers cause they weren't useful at all and js a stepping stone
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someonesdaughter456

Hi!! I hope you’re doing good? I just wanted to know when you will finish your story

Fallenjewel

You're Welcome
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someonesdaughter456

Okay thank you so much
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Fallenjewel

@someonesdaughter456 I might be done in 2 or 3 chapters
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