Hello Fallout_geek, this is Shepard_Drawings from Instagram and I would like to personally make you a proposition. You see I like the way your stories have been playing, out but as I continue to read it; I notice a moderate amounts of errors where it could possibly make the story harder to read. But if you were to allow me to edit your story, I can easily make it much more easier to read thus: making the story much more enjoyable. Please consider my proposal, and I hope to hear from you very soon. -Shepard