FanFawn

Aye, I'm working on a runaway story I might not post tho

WinchesterRobbin

Hello, earlier this morning you asked me to do a review of your story "Numbers in my Head", so im really glad that after reading it all over again I can realese my opinion and advice. I must say that the beginning you re-made was very sophisticated,  actually having a secondary mental space which, I think, will be elaborated soon. The story you're writing has a special charm, it's uniqueness of a world authors create, and for that we also have to focus on how we present it to the audience. It's great what you're doing, remember that's pretty brave to share your works to the world and exposing to all that comes with it, keep going and enjoying literature and it's wonders. 
          
          Thanks for writing, if you need me once more so not hesitate.
          
          - Jamie GR.