Well, you're welcome and if you've noticed I took down the story for now and I'm currently taking your sorta brutal criticism to heart. But to be fair, it's been 7 years... anyways, I see your point! I probably should have put more thought into it, but I feel as if I am just an inadequate Trekkie as of now. I'm going to make a blanket burrow not come out until I know what I'm doing, really.