@Katie12Is4 of course I can help you! My advice is to plan out your chapters before you write. So you don’t get muddled up or make your readers confused. And to put some unexpected events in your story like say for instance Travis and LingLing were going on a romantic date then all of a sudden Vicky jumps out of some bushes and hits Travis in the back making him fall into a deep sleep. That keeps your story interesting * \(^__^)/*