twobirdsonefox

hey I love your books and you seem very skilled, can you judge my book and give me some criticism? thank you!!!

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@ twobirdsonefox  no problem. I am glad I could help
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twobirdsonefox

@Garfield2005lisanne omg thank you so much!!!! I will definitely try to subtly add some drama
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FanfictionStories5

@ twobirdsonefox hey I like your book too. I personally would add a little extra drama to make it more interesting. If you do add drama you will have to watch out you don't add to much. I know I said this before but I really like your book.
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