Quentin Thrasher

I recently read something that made me go back to my Legend of Zelda FanFic and look at the previous chapters. I changed some details to make the story role better and stick as close to the game and manga as I can. I hope y'all enjoy and more chapters will be released soon in a big bundle. Thank you for the reads and follows. 

"In the days of old there was a battle between light and darkness. But unlike the common belief the darkness was not the enemy but Mankind's ally." Said the old man to the group of children that had gathered around him. "It was in the age of the pirate when they sailed in wooden ships across every ocean. When the pirate was feared and the navy was ever looking for treasure. Pirate and Soldiers were always at war but underneath the cover was a dark and sinister truth. Three clans that were at war with each other. Out of this secret war came the beacon of Darkness in the burning light of the Sun. Of a man on both sides of the coin Navy and Pirate." The children all glared at one child as his phone went off. After the child turned off his phone the old man continued the story. "The legend starts on a ship in the middle of a stormy ocean. With a man holding onto life with a failing strength...."
          
          This is the description to my newest book. It won't be released until it's finished which will take a while but I guess I want an opinion on it.

I have went back through my Legend of Zelda FanFic and found most of the mistakes. But if you find anymore please tell me. I want to make my story better.

So I'm just going to say what everybody already knows. Sometimes when I write I type so fast that I don't realize that I'm misspelling words or that I'm using the wrong version of a word. I might use the wrong punctuation. If you happen to be reading something I wrote and you come upon a mistake. Then please tell me so that I can go back a remedy it.

I'm sorry for the halt on my stories. I've been busy with life. I'm back to writing and I'll be updating as fast as I can.

Thanks for the follow my friend:)

Okay guys I may need some help. I'm literally stuck at one scene and I can't move on from it.