@ZAaali I thought it was great. Excuse the fact that I didn't vote or comment but I try not to do that unless left on a huge cliffhanger that hasn't updated in awhile.
@Seaweedgirlforever it's up to you. It is your story. I honestly believe that whatever you write there will be someone out there who will notice it and love it.
@Seaweedgirlforever Maybe you should try and write it. It was your idea and if you don't trust your writing skills I could Beta it but be warned. I'm only in eight grade.