phenilb
Thanks for the review. Also, you are the first one to actually review the whole book instead of just the first two chapters. You are right about many of the criticisms bit not all. You are spot on about asspulls and the rushed ending. Because by the end I wasnt writing the book for myself anymore but was writing it for the sake of readers. I didn't enjoy it as much as I did in the beginning.
Anyway thanks again.
FantasySovereign
@phenilb Yeah, the beginning was way more on track, but later on it just felt rushed and new plots kept jumping out of nowhere. I think if you just went back and actually wrote what happened during the time skips that would be a way better story. At least for me, your story should have way more parts dedicated to skills, levels and stats. That's the essence of what a gamer is (again, at least for me).