OK reading some of comments i just want to first apologize to those of you who have been here since i first posted the story things happened and yeah sorry, no onto the other things everyone who has commented on missing chapters i took them all down so i could rewrite them and add a little more here and there to them as you read though now you will notice time dates and locations this will play out in the long run and you will understand it a little more so bear with (this also helps with my time problem) i found a really useful site the let me make an actual calendar for this so i might be condensing it to make a simple version for the book if that interests anyone let me know and i will post it there will be changes for those who first read it as i will be moving some of the incidents further in the story so i am not just throwing the MC into fight after fight. i want to build a proper base her to support the story into the future . OK i might be rambling but i am posting the rewritten chapters as quickly as i can so i can get to where i need to so i can write new chapters i will take any constructive criticism you have so i can make this better if you spot something let me know please