Fatesknight

ok sorry about the wait my wife was having alot of trouble getting around so things got delayed but here it is so far in the story the chapters have only had a little changes and the time stamp but we are coming up on some major changes in the story line within the next chapter or two so enjoy

Reaver1234

Howdy, just thought I would drop in and say keep writing.
          Been reading dragons of arma since it was only 2 chapters in another location and been loving it.
          I’ve never seen this approach to mystic/mythic writing.

justanotherreader3

Will you be continuing with your novels? They are awesome and I have re-read all of them multiple times while waiting for more 
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Fatesknight

ok sorry about the wait my wife was having alot of trouble getting around so things got delayed but here it is so far in the story the chapters have only had a little changes and the time stamp but we are coming up on some major changes in the story line within the next chapter or two so enjoy

Fatesknight

OK everyone here is another chapter it might take me a little longer between posts for the next month my wife had surgery on her ankle but she is making me sit down to correct my chapters. i am still going to try to stick to once a week so enjoy chapter 3

Fatesknight

On another note i am sorry to inform you that the reason i am rewriting everything in this story because publisher thought it wasn't great it was good but needed lots of work so i will be redoing this but this time i will be doing it better and you guys will get to read all my chapters before i resubmit it so congrats you will get the book for free lol once it is done though i will be getting it published so you all can get it permanently for your libraries

Mizdrgn

@Fatesknight did you ever finish it?  I haven’t finished yet, but from what I’ve read so far I would be happy to pay for the finished book!  
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Fatesknight

ok i know i posted 2 but my loving fyre read it and pointed out a few thing like the global collage broadcast and how i didn't say what that was or meant so i just edited chapter 2 really quickly if anyone sees anything that reads wrong in their head or if you think i didn't add enough detail to the event and it left you confused please feel free to message me and let me know so i can fix it for you my great readers

zeroman86

@Fatesknight one thing i want to say is great job I remember you from that site and loved this story when it came out then and its really good to find you again and this story as well one to add maybe an index about all the different users like you did before in one of your chapters and are we gonna learn what the hell voice is that keeps talking to heath
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Fatesknight

OK reading some of comments i just want to first apologize to those of you who have been here since i first posted the story things happened and yeah sorry, no onto the other things everyone who has commented on missing chapters i took them all down so i could rewrite them and add a little more here and there to them as you read though now you will notice time dates and locations this will play out in the long run and you will understand it a little more so bear with (this also helps with my time problem) i found a really useful site the let me make an actual calendar for this so i might be condensing it to make a simple version for the book if that interests anyone let me know and i will post it there will be changes for those who first read it as i will be moving some of the incidents further in the story so i am not just throwing the MC into fight after fight. i want to build a proper base her to support the story into the future . OK i might be rambling but i am posting the rewritten chapters as quickly as i can so i can get to where i need to so i can write new chapters i will take any constructive criticism you have so i can make this better if you spot something let me know please