FauxColors

I made a new story that is just my own perspective on religion and spirituality. Slightly long-winded, but it's only three relatively brief parts. I typed it all up over the course of roughly three hours while drunk so I am not sure whether it is a great work of mine or pure rambling. While I know that is not exactly an endorsement I would appreciate feedback, whether it be about the writing quality or my perspective.

FauxColors

I made a new story that is just my own perspective on religion and spirituality. Slightly long-winded, but it's only three relatively brief parts. I typed it all up over the course of roughly three hours while drunk so I am not sure whether it is a great work of mine or pure rambling. While I know that is not exactly an endorsement I would appreciate feedback, whether it be about the writing quality or my perspective.