Cakie009

Miracle Doctor had lots of potential and great concept. I did stop reading but wanted to offer some criticism because with work it could be incredible.
          
          1) It needed grounding, you gave a MC incredible skills like doctor, assassin and spy agent but no explanation how she balances so much or drawbacks. I loved that she knows how to heal and OP gifts are cool. It would be nice to see her use camouflage she gained as a spy and fighting skills from being an assassin in earlier stages.
          
          2) Her motives need clarifying, the kids are seen as her top priority but apart from feeding them, she keeps leaving for quests and it waters down value of reader connecting to her goals. I would of loved to see the kids taught self-defence or educated survival training.
          
          3) Target your writing style, every line was dramatic and cause for drama with some punchy short sentences and every sentence separated. The overuse makes it lose its power. As a dyslexic, spacing between lines is super important to avoid straining my eyes, I appreciate every sentence separated but I feel there can be a middle ground. Condense information where you can and the information you feel is invaluable to the storyline.
          
          I hoped this helped ❤️ I hope to read an improved version in the future.