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Hello I've been reading your star wars fanfic lately and i have to say your writing is great you make a situation perfectly clear but bit of advice try to not write situations continuously since it hurts or rather messed up to say i would advise you to arrange every paragraph well every column 
          
          I could send you an example if you Discord but all and all your a great writer with great potential keep it up all the best for you 
          
          Have a good day

Hello guys. I know there are a lot of mistakes in my Star Wars Fanfic. I’m just new to the universe. I made a few adjustments in the universe.