I read your profile and wanted to let you know that - Yes, you are doing this right - . You are a great writer and I think that you can only become greater ^_^ I shall now point out all the epic things about your stories :D
- Proper use of grammar and punctuation (Thank the cupcake lord! I am a total grammar Nazi/punctuation police member so please take this as a compliment)
- Epic Plots! (The story lines are super eye catching!)
- The fact that your wrote a boyxboy story all in itself is something that's awesome to me.
I'd go on, but I'm lazy and typing requires work so...
Anyway, you asked for feedback and a heartwarming message, and here I give you both :) Love your stories and I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter(s). Please update when you get the chance! (not rushing you because I have very very very very very low inspiration and writing counts)