@Wolfienyaa sure! I’ve read some of your books and they look great!
Some of the good things I’ve noticed is that you put space between pieces of text, which usually helps people reading the story better without confusion
You also describe things like surroundings very well, and also explain the actions the characters take.
I would suggest not using the same font for several characters since it could get confusing for the reader, and the slanted font is oftenly used for things like letters.
Other then that, your books have been nice to read! I hope this was able to help