Hi Dear!
Hope you are doing well, I recently found your Sarbiya story and really loved your writing. I wanted to suggest a story of Zanjeerein little differently like when Mudassir and Sarbuland met Rabiya at Dhaba, not only Mudassir but Sarbuland also fell for her. He ignored his feelings because of his engagement with Bano and later Mudassir's interest in her. But when Destiny brought her to him, he couldn't stop his growing feelings towards her. He was guilty for Bano as he realised his feelings for her was just attachment while towards Rabiya it's different. Like he stares at secretly and adverts his gaze whenever she looks at him, her pain was clearly visible on his face that's not normal, his care towards her, he entered her room without thinking about their family traditions and tribe rules, he never entered Bano's room like that, how he always agree to whatever she says except the thing of leaving the haveli. He avoided making eye contact with her because of his fears of getting exposed. His going to every extent to save her, leaving behind the gun just because of her despite knowing the situation. Something like that plus Rabiya also didn't love Mudassir, she married him for her family's sake. She became comfortable with him, started liking him but that doesn't count as love. She was guilty for everything happened with him, but her admiring Sarbuland is different. If you can make something like that. It's ok if you don't i understand, best of luck with next parts anf eagerly waiting for your updates.
