FeliceMuk

READ MY BOOK :D

eveythingisblue

@FeliceMuk Your book is SWEET! ;D
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dililahbacall

Hi, I haven't had the chance to read all of the chapters of your book so far, but there were some things I have noticed.  For English not being your first language, it was filled with pretty correct grammar.   The only thing I noticed was that you sometimes confused past, present and future.  For instance: saying have instead of had.  I would just go back and check out your verbs.  Otherwise everything looked really good.