Feline-on-Fleek

So I just finished reading a book called stuck in elevator and it was suggested to me idk by whom...  frm an ista page ig?? Now onto the point 
          	So this is not the first book i found bad but the problem is the author left me so frustrated that I decided to vent my anst here. So what happened the book started so beautifully like very unique plot interesting characters. The females mc was so sassy in the start and the chemistry between the main characters was so on point and natural. The story was going beautifully until the author decided to add unnecessary plot twist and characters and it all got so confusing.  I was like wtf??! One second the female mc is in love with male mc and the next she kisses his brother who was not even introduced up until now. Wait what?
          	This is not it !! After the characters were rescued the story did a complete 180 and the whole persona of both characters changed I was like did the author read the previous chapters before writing this . It was that messed up. And I was so frustrated because the author defo have the potential to write a masterpiece like I just want to cry bec this story was so so good and the characters were so adorable before the author decided to mess it. And the part which riled up to the extent was when in the end the female mc called all her feelings for the male mc lust LUST??? R u freaking kidding me???!?!? It was not at all lust !! You stupid stupid girl a  chapter before you loved him. This makes this whole story pointless.

danielletalbury

Thanks for listing my story! I hope you enjoy it ☺️

danielletalbury

@chinmai_bts Thank you so much for your feedback! This was so lovely to read ❤️ I love the Sienna love—hopefully you’ll enjoy seeing more of her in the sequel ☺️
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Feline-on-Fleek

@danielletalbury  omg ! Just finished reading this book. This book was crazy like in every sense crazy CRAZY.  I can not keep it down . Every chapter kept me  at hook. You did a wonderful job like truly i was so deep into this. This story was totally opposite of what I thought it would be and boy did I liked it! The characters,  twists and turns were so unpredictable you kept me guessing till end. Creative plot , interesting and morally grey characters,  group dynamics and banter and a great writing style. I can not choose my fav character.  They were all so morally screwed  and terrible but I loved all of them (maybe except one). And totally head over heals with Sienna Hawthorne
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Feline-on-Fleek

So I just finished reading a book called stuck in elevator and it was suggested to me idk by whom...  frm an ista page ig?? Now onto the point 
          So this is not the first book i found bad but the problem is the author left me so frustrated that I decided to vent my anst here. So what happened the book started so beautifully like very unique plot interesting characters. The females mc was so sassy in the start and the chemistry between the main characters was so on point and natural. The story was going beautifully until the author decided to add unnecessary plot twist and characters and it all got so confusing.  I was like wtf??! One second the female mc is in love with male mc and the next she kisses his brother who was not even introduced up until now. Wait what?
          This is not it !! After the characters were rescued the story did a complete 180 and the whole persona of both characters changed I was like did the author read the previous chapters before writing this . It was that messed up. And I was so frustrated because the author defo have the potential to write a masterpiece like I just want to cry bec this story was so so good and the characters were so adorable before the author decided to mess it. And the part which riled up to the extent was when in the end the female mc called all her feelings for the male mc lust LUST??? R u freaking kidding me???!?!? It was not at all lust !! You stupid stupid girl a  chapter before you loved him. This makes this whole story pointless.

sabhyatasahu4

Thanks a lot for adding 'Married to become Mr & Mrs Billionaire'to your reading list. This story is really close to my heart ❤. If you like the chapters. please do ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐VOTE for them and leave your precious COMMENTS. As a writer, It's really uplifting to know your efforts are being appreciated.  ❤❤❤  And please do check out my other stories as well. ❤️
          "Violet Hues" https://my.w.tt/k58iHqeF96 
          Mafia & Miss Honey  https://my.w.tt/8pa1pZZZu9  &
          "Aurora's Aura" https://my.w.tt/0RuxDM9E96 
          and my latest story, 'His Captive' https://my.w.tt/l5YaHCCPLcb
          -   @SabhyataSahu