I'm sorry but your story 3 little directions or whatever has a lot of grammar mistakes. I love your story it's just hard to read because of the mistakes. I'll point some out: say it's in Paige's POV, instead of, me, cece, and Kara; try, cece, Kara, and I. I'm not trying to be mean. Also you have some words that are either in the wrong tense: past tense, future tense, etc.; or words that are misspelled or not even words. Love your story!! Keep writing!! But try working on those grammar mistakes. Thanks!!!!!