FesteringFiesta

if you could check out my story & tell me anything wrong with it, that would be fab!
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/49928847-new-feelings-chapter-1

hello. (: 
          i know this is going to be a very irritating message, but i really need your help. see, i know people don't particularly like twilight anymore becuse it is totally over-rated - and i totally agree - but i just posted this fanfiction and i was wondering if you think i should continue? 
          
          if you don't like twilight, then feel free to ignore this, but i would really appreciate it. basically, i wrote it ages ago and i recently found it, so i decided to post it. 
          
          i promise is it's not a typical story; the storyline isn't half bad, so i would seriously appreciate any feedback. 
          
          although, please, if you could; some proper critisicm and improvements are much needed. im o wattpad to become better, not to go offline with some 'interesting' comments. so, please... fire the critisicm at me; il take it and deal with it. (: 
          
          thankyou, ever so much, 
          creatingbalance_ 
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/488290-echoing-sunlight

Hey, 
          
          I was wondering if you have the time could you check out my stories 
          
          Wish came true...unfortunately. I have up an intro and the first 13 chapters 
          
          I Love You More Each Time You Hit Me. I just started it and have up an intro and the first 2 chapters. 
          
          It would mean a lot to me if you could check them out and tell me what you think. 
          
          Thanks for your time, 
          ~Jenny :)

heey! i was hoping if you had the time you would be able to read my story "Behind Closed Doors" 
          I would love to hear your feedback! :)
          comment // vote // fan
          anything at all :)
          
          xoxo Tarah

Hey!!
          
          Please check out my stories :)
          
          Theo Clayton, I Hate You
          
          &
          
          The Time Runners
          
          It would be greatly appreciated if you could Comment and Vote and let me know what you think :)
          
          Thankyou
          
          DayoldBlues xx

HI...i hope that you could read my story on..." A story of twisted fate(an immortal story)the past, present and future. When dreams turn to be real" and a poem on “love and hate” and "silent love" read other poems if u have the time.
          please comment, fan and vote....your comment means a lot to me....thanks.
          PLS READ THE POEM ON” SILENT LOVE”…comment
          

could you please read my series of poetry contest entries? Each one is very different so if you hate the first you might love the next! I'd realy like your opinion and comments/votes are realy appriciated!!
           
          Love the story btw!:)
          -5aV

hey,
          i was wondering if you could read my story Friends with benefits?
          PLEASE VOTE AND COMMENT!

WELCOME TO WATTPAD!!!!!! If it wasn't too much could you read my story. It's called My Mate For Life. It's47 on What's Hot List!!!!! Comment and Vote if you like. It's about a teenage girl who gets pregnant by a werewolf. It's filled with love, passion, and many twist along the way. THANKS!!!! 
          
          

Hey,
          I was wondering if you could take the time to read my stories, 'The Transformation (A Werewolf Story)' and 'I was normal. Until I was changed into vampire.....royalty?!?' Please comment, vote, or if you love it, become a fan!
          
          Thanks a Plenty,
          JaBooker