Fictionalwriter

Hey sorry for disturbance but can you give a chance to my book and let me know if it's lacking somewhere. Your suggestions might help me.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/387912543?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=writerprisha

Hi dear, I hope you are doing well
          I just published my first story and I would be glad if you give it a chance
          I am open for suggestions
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/378570600?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=MoonlitMinni

Hi ...everyone ...hope your healthy ..
          Sorry for not posting frequently ...my exams are on ....ill post after 25 of Feb and if you like the stories or see mistakes pls tell in the comment box
          
          Regards
          Fictionalwrite