@Fiction_escapade no, it was an awesome book, I can't tell you how long I've been searching for a good were book! One that isn't full of the cliche 3 plot stories! Oh yeah... Just wondering, is it possible for you to possibly edit the first 2 chapters? No offence but it kind of is bland compared to the current chapter, I can help you if you want. Sorry, it just bothers me..... But lovely book. Am. I correct on my guess though!?