LittleMissCupcaky
1 suggestion is add a pixie 2 if someone dies sadly they could be walking but hit by a car. 3 could you make the main person have a talent
Fire_Feathers
Fire_Feathers
Please tell me if you guys have any suggestions because this is my first ever story that I am writing here. It will be highly appreciated if you guys tell me how you think about my story when I am finished. Thank you, and have a great day!