Aries

Thank you for stopping by and finding my work enjoyable :) I hope you write some awesome stuff you’ve got in your head, I’d love to be able to read it! Have a great day!

New Story! Check It Out! https://www.wattpad.com/story/141446421

new story! https://www.wattpad.com/story/117479888

Hey, started reading your book. I'm going to give you some honest feedback, which you can choose to take into consideration if you wish. I read/write books 24/7 so i have experience. 
          1. Your book is very confusing. The begining chapters are good up until after the massacre
          2. Your book jumps around a lot. Meaning you don't take time to explain things. You don't give each chapter a chance to tell a story or to create a picture in a readers mind.
          3. You have various spelling errors
          4. You need to go more in detail with certain things. For example what a mage is for people who don't know. That needs to be a whole chapter by itself.
          5. Your chapters are too short.
          Don't take anything I said to harshly, only trying to help
          

thank you for the follow! feel free to pm me whenever you like. if you have a few moments, would you mind checking out my new story "the room" and voting and commenting if you like it? thank you again, have a nice day! XD

Writing my new book haven't started the chapters ,but I hope you take a look at it

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The book is going well and I hope all of you will read it and I'm starting a new story and I will start it soon and its call the girl who lost her memory anyways I hope you read the truth will set you free I'm almost done to finish it