@chrisman54 I had a bit of time to check out Taken, the plot is interesting but the story could use a bit of editing. I would also recommend a different cover, so it would draw more attention.
I don't know how to say this but do you mind updating some of the stories like the one about severous daughter (harry potter) it's so amazing and I don't wish to be trapped in the middle of it so please please UPDATE for the love of god UPDATE take as much as you want but UPDATE I repeat UPDATE.
@chrisman54 I had a bit of time to check out Taken, the plot is interesting but the story could use a bit of editing. I would also recommend a different cover, so it would draw more attention.