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Part 1 of The Girl At The Door is NOW OUT!
          	The girls are still clueless as to what's going on and the police are on their way.
          	
          	I just published "The Girl At The Door: Part II" of my story "ALIVE". https://www.wattpad.com/1105777494?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=FirstCreator&wp_originator=haMnuATVaGYH0pTyRO8887yiu8CTEwN2Pi20wNDPk0yPK%2Bl%2BHwCY2Wvd48MnVEtfsTkDn4mcQvLyP3kBVF8EaOJk6kJJiGJePrmPp3PJ7FPtCjQa5gYzkUGL5EjimkeA

FirstCreator

Part 1 of The Girl At The Door is NOW OUT!
          The girls are still clueless as to what's going on and the police are on their way.
          
          I just published "The Girl At The Door: Part II" of my story "ALIVE". https://www.wattpad.com/1105777494?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=FirstCreator&wp_originator=haMnuATVaGYH0pTyRO8887yiu8CTEwN2Pi20wNDPk0yPK%2Bl%2BHwCY2Wvd48MnVEtfsTkDn4mcQvLyP3kBVF8EaOJk6kJJiGJePrmPp3PJ7FPtCjQa5gYzkUGL5EjimkeA

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Okay, I'm done editing the first chapter and...DAMN. it was a long chapter in the draft but I didn't expect the first edit to come in at...around 8K-plus words.
          
          Yeah...I'm going to split it into two parts. I'll post the first part soon. Let me know how good it's improved or if it's too improved haha.