Greetings dear author, it is I, your latest follower. And I just wanted to formally introduce myself. You may call me Sympathy or Empathy, deat author.
First of all I wanted to say how much I love your DMC x Male Reader stories because the number of these kind of stories online are few, which is sad to be honest, so thank you for writing these books.
Second, I wished to share a few writing tips, then again your writing is professional level already, if I may?
1. In the subject of romantic relationship, strive to write something that is both realistic and healthy. Based on what I have read in other stories sometimes the author either made the relationship unrealistic or toxic or sometimes both and that made me think if those authors really knows how relationships work.
But what you have are healthy, a little bit rush relationships but it's better than most I've seen trust me. Like in Nero x Male Reader story I'm glad that Nero is there to support Reader(Y/N) throughout the story, their friendship is so diabetes-inducing(a.k.a so sweet) BUT aren't they moving a little bit too fast in their relationship. Forgive my poor memory, but isn't Nero and Kiere's break-up was just recent and then some time passed Reader and Nero became a couple again forgive my poor memory. Maybe just maybe, Reader may have said something along the lines of:
Nero, you've just broken up with Kiere and I refuse to be your rebound (guy/person). But it doesn't mean I'm not interested in you. Why do I say this?
Remember Nero, you're the first person who went out of their way to help me( because of my poor memory, I think Nero protected Reader from Vergil when Vergil's initiation went too far) and because of that you have a special place in my heart and because of you I know now that I made a relationship that will last a lifetime.