Fish-sensei

Heyo. Made a new story. Be sure to check it out. It's a Gavin reed x m reader :p

SympathyandEmpathy

@Fish-sensei Finally, a Gavin Reed x Male Reader!
          	  I've been trying to find one of these since the game came out. 
          	  Also the description of the story is very intriguing. I'm curious, where does the line between friends and lovers is?
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Fish-sensei

Heyo. Made a new story. Be sure to check it out. It's a Gavin reed x m reader :p

SympathyandEmpathy

@Fish-sensei Finally, a Gavin Reed x Male Reader!
            I've been trying to find one of these since the game came out. 
            Also the description of the story is very intriguing. I'm curious, where does the line between friends and lovers is?
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SympathyandEmpathy

   Greetings dear author, it is I, your latest follower. And I just wanted to formally introduce myself. You may call me Sympathy or Empathy, deat author.
          
             First of all I wanted to say how much I love your DMC x Male Reader stories because the number of these kind of stories online are few, which is sad to be honest, so thank you for writing these books.
          
             Second, I wished to share a few writing tips, then again your writing is professional level already, if I may?
          
          1. In the subject of romantic relationship, strive to write something that is both realistic and healthy. Based on what I have read in other stories sometimes the author either made the relationship unrealistic or toxic or sometimes both and that made me think if those authors really knows how relationships work.
           
          But what you have are healthy, a little bit rush relationships but it's better than most I've seen trust me. Like in Nero x Male Reader story I'm glad that Nero is there to support Reader(Y/N) throughout the story, their friendship is so diabetes-inducing(a.k.a so sweet) BUT aren't they moving a little bit too fast in their relationship. Forgive my poor memory, but isn't Nero and Kiere's break-up was just recent and then some time passed Reader and Nero became a couple again forgive my poor memory. Maybe just maybe, Reader may have said something along the lines of:
          
          Nero, you've just broken up with Kiere and I refuse to be your rebound (guy/person). But it doesn't mean I'm not interested in you. Why do I say this?
          
          Remember Nero, you're the first person who went out of their way to help me( because of my poor memory, I think Nero protected Reader from Vergil when Vergil's initiation went too far) and because of that you have a special place in my heart and because of you I know now that I made a relationship that will last a lifetime.

SympathyandEmpathy

@Crazycontentcreator 
            I'm more than happy to help. It's what I do here in Wattpad. If a see an oppurtunity of improvement I make sure I point it out 
            And I'm most of the time free to chat but I have to be honest, due to my job I may reply a little bit later. But what I'm trying to say is, your grammar and vocubalary is already good and I just wanted to share my knowledge about relationships.
            Speaking of relationships we have:
            Platonic
            Romantic
            Friendship
            Familial
            Dysfunctional
            Toxic/Abusive
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Fish-sensei

@SympathyandEmpathy THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! I. Author-kun. Will do my best.... no.... I will TAKE your advice as much as possible and incorporate it to my work. This is honestly the greatest piece if advice i have ever heard!!!!
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SympathyandEmpathy

And this is where my message ends dear author. So I'll go here anticipating for your next update and commenting here and there.
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