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Hahaha, I can only tell you that an unwitting pretender will appear at some point in the story, nobody will expect it, and it will appear in the most absurd way possible, a pretender not discreet like Jazz, and no, it's not Purson. Purson has rather forged a strange kind of friendship with Violetta. And Kalego... well, he'll stop working for a couple of hours when that happens.
            
            Asmodeus still sees her as someone honorable, but Violetta, being obsessed with surpassing him, feels those little butterflies in her stomach whenever Asmodeus speaks to her. She has no idea that she's experiencing "I like this guy," because she doesn't have enough understanding of social dynamics to reach that conclusion.
            
            I have a lot of fun writing when Violetta and Kalego share the same brain cell. Father and daughter don't understand social dynamics (Kalego a little more, but he's not a character who expresses many emotions because he doesn't know how to handle them, but Violetta is an absolute disaster), and that's where Uncle Shichiro comes in as the "official translator." So while Kalego represents discipline (essential because of Violetta's condition), Shichiro is her emotional refuge. Violetta has the same line of thinking as Kalego. That's why she uses Kalego's own logic against him. That's why Violetta is more sarcastic with Kalego, and with Shichiro she allows herself to be more vulnerable because she knows he won't judge her. And that's what creates those dynamic moments between the three of them.
            
            And Raim will take teaching Violetta very seriously. No, she won't teach her seduction; she'll teach her precisely what she told Kalego he failed to teach Violetta: social dynamics. Violetta will still be Violetta, logical, pragmatic, and direct, because 14 years of Kalego's upbringing ingrained in her ribs can't be erased in a couple of classes, but she will understand her surroundings a little better.
            
            Even so, Kalego will continue to insist that Violetta leave Raim's class XD.

@ Paovar8  Noo Paola don't treat me like this. Spill the beans please. I'm very curious but I'll wait for the continuation of your story. 
            
            I really like Kalego and Violetta oblivious about Jazz parts. They are so cute, uncle Shicirou to the rescue.
            
            When Violet studied in the succubi class because of Sabro words with Clara, they have the same but also different reasons  It makes my stomach tingle, they really entertain me with their antics. Poor Raim Sensei who have no idea why she couldn't see Violet level but she was determined about teaching her. Oh also poor Papa Kalego who opposed Violet to take the succubi class. 
            
            The story is amazing, I will wait for the next chapter. I'll also wait to see who Violetta ends up with and what Papa Kalego's reaction will be. 
            
            Please take care of your health and don't push yourself too hard, dear Paola!

Hi!
            
            Don't worry! I realized right away that you're more of a reader than a commenter. Your vote on each chapter makes me feel very motivated; a writer owes it to their readers!
            
            You don't have to comment if you don't want to. I'm happy to see your vote on each chapter. Thank you for being there from the beginning!
            
            Oh, but don't worry about your English, I'm Cuban living in Cuba. My native language is Spanish. So my English is bad too! Imagine that I write each chapter in Spanish. Then I have to run it through AI for translation. But there are some jokes and descriptions that are translated literally and don't sound right, so after that, I have to review the entire chapter to adapt into English what the AI ​​translation missed.
            
            For example, when Jazz calls Violetta "tough girl". In Spanish it's "chica dura." And Violetta interprets it literally as meaning that she is "hard as a rock, not made of flesh." In English, "tough girl" is more often used to mean "baddass" or "rude." So I had to change the joke so that she interprets what Jazz says to her as "he called me a rude girl."
            
            I also had to adapt some of the jokes from the Raim class chapter because of Violetta's literal interpretations.
            
            It's hard work, but fun, and I'm learning a little English this way!
            
            And I'm so glad you're enjoying the story so much. If you're shy about leaving a public comment, you can always message me privately.
            
            Now... Violetta and Jazz...? Or... Violetta and Asmodeus...?
            
            Or maybe... no, I can't say anything yet!