Hello! I did check out your work just now. The storyline shows potential for the book, but there are so many stories like this one on Wattpad that it sets pretty high standards for popularity. At the first glance, the story is quite good, but you need to brush it up for it to get noticed. It moves really speedily and hardly shows a flow in the ideas. I hope you take my comments in a positive light. Good luck! ❤️