NoctisVes

Hi, I just wanted to ask were your awesome story The Pianist and The Rocker went? When i went to read it again, it just wasn't there anymore and i didnt know if you deleted it or just unpublished it? But either way it was an amazing story when i read it when it was still here

CalikaLe

For your FFE, make the chapters chop in paragraph. Long chapter can make your readers go crazy. And same with your dialogue. However, your plot is good. So making a your writing more precise can do the magic. Have a nice day and enjoy writing!