FlorK2D

Next update is up. 
          	Enjoy
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/403282560

FlorK2D

Hi guys. 
          
          Sorry for the late update. 
          
          Am in an impromptu meeting with my coworkers and our supervisors. 
          
          I promise to update today, give me an hour or two, I am already done with the next chapter but I haven't posted it on wattpad yet. 
          
          I will do that soon and publish the next update right after the meeting.

siaramchandra

@FlorK2D no worries dude
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siaramchandra

@FlorK2D shot 11 i got notification but not opening, redirecting to shot 1
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FlorK2D

@siaramchandra I accidentally published it. 
            It up now
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AliIbrahimi6

hi, is it possible for you to write some thing on Arshi ..its just request if possible the top is....about a story on Arshi with this consent ..what if khushi had not ready to accept his past lifestyle or affairs relationships (if fake or name sake not really involve in such thing then make him prove it)?  how both of them expressed regret for his past, non-committal lifestyle itself or for not being a virgin for her (if he was involve love to see him virgin and only truly one woman man of khushi) , plus focus their current love, trust issues, and emotional pain caused by misunderstandings plus specifics of his past relationships. .....
          
          Story to stat from :
          1. story start from Diwali night when he announce enegement with lavanay after almost kiss and later realized his blunder and wanted khushi in his life. 
          2. story start from her falling from cliff in possess of saving  him as her responsibility of wife or correct the  mistake she made if proving her innocent and fall in trap of shyam and made arnav sign paper on shyam request thread to help her.
          3. story start from him calling her biggest mistake of his life and opening all her old wounds which she ignored or wanted to forget as she to love Arnav but now his own behavior and not ready to forgive her only mistake of hiding shaym truth and continuing balm causing and point finger on other character target her to  reject him 
          4. Please if possible show him and his past color lifestyle real or fake ..he to need to prove himself as virgin and all relationship he had were name sake or in friendly zone only and he never involve in any physical ..as its easy to point on others charter but hard when it happened to you…so he may also realized his accusation pain depth of her hurt of his Poisons word he so easily without thinking throw on khushi so causally where iso hard to handle and never be easily for girl like khushi show his redemption and wooing khushi back …

AliIbrahimi6

appreciate a lot for accepting the request .... thank you...will wait for the story ☺️
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FlorK2D

@AliIbrahimi6 okay I would try to after am done with the Sheetal track
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AliIbrahimi6

Way to write plot:
            1. Prolonged Conflict and Drama: The creators would likely have introduced a major storyline where Khushi's traditional values clashed with the reality of Arnav's past. This would have led to more episodes dedicated to their arguments, emotional distance, and a need for further reconciliation.
            2. Arnav's Deeper Redemption Arc: Arnav would have had to do more than just fall in love and get married. He would have needed to explicitly apologize or demonstrate profound regret for his past in a way that the actual show never required of him. He might have needed to make significant sacrifices or gestures to prove his current devotion to her purity and values.
            3. Khushi's Moral Struggle: The narrative would focus heavily on Khushi's internal struggle with her family's values, her love for Arnav, and her ability to forgive and move past his history.
            4. Potential Separation (Temporary): The conflict might have been severe enough to cause a temporary separation, where Khushi leaves the house or refuses to fully commit to the marriage until she achieved peace with the situation.
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AliIbrahimi6

hi, hi, Hi, I know this story is not belong to you but still requesting ..........the story is amazing love to read till end but on hold since Sun, Apr 25, 2021........is it possible for you to resume or write similar story like this ....it a magical world story ..If possible can you write similar in your way
          Thank you
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/179659307-%E2%80%8D♂%EF%B8%8F-arshi-ff-warrior-fairies-%E2%80%8D♀%EF%B8%8F