I hate for doing this, but I'm taking the story down. This is the second time I do it, taking a story down, but I have a tendency of writing without outlining what i want to happen in my stories, and I was doing it with Running away. I was writing it with the intention of making it a mystery/thriller, then somewhere in my thoughts, and what i started writing it started to become a love triangle, like What? I'm sorry. I have been working on something, and hopefully I go through with it. Again I'm sorry, and Thank You for all the votes, I really really appreciated them. Thank You!! I promise to be back. I'm just going to work on my outline, and where i want the story to go, I'm sorry for the false hopes.
If your curious of how it ended like this, I was writing my story on paper first, because I kept getting ideas of what would happen. anyways somewhere in the story Riccardo , and Etta were going to end up falling for each other especially since he saved her, but I realized that Riccardo's character was just not fit for Etta. especially with Max having loved her for so long. and i never intended to have Riccardo fall for her, but it just freaking happened. I'm pretty sure my writing and story was confusing anyways, so yea. but when i get it together hopefully soon, with college n all, but I'M GOING TO MAKE IT WORK! I PROMISE!
again I'm sorry,
and Thank you, I mean it thank you! Take care!