Alright. I've read the first two chapters of your story and I'm HOOKED.
It's really good. I think it's mostly because I'm into the whole 'bad boy/mysterious dude' genre.
I think you're a really good writer and if you ever need a little inspiration, there's this other story on Wattpad (that's also along the 'bad boy' lines) called Saving Elliot.
To sum it up, your story is really good and you should keep up the good work. I won't make this any longer for you to read so bye and have a nice night.