FlowerxWolf

Been battling a crazy headache this past week, that’s only getting worse  updates are a little slow atm cuz of than 

chubbymoonfish

I enjoyed the story till now it's engaging but not keeping up with the title. It has to be more about Jena rather than keeping up the twilight story that's the background thing. The explanation of her hallucinations and visions is good but that's what the story has to be about . The rescue scene with Jasper was fine but it would have been better to make it more about her. Why not try to divert a bit from the twilight setting and add more of ur follow. Cause the concept is really nice... 

FlowerxWolf

This is actually really helpful, thank you! 
            I do have things planned out for book one, but I will keep this in mind! I appreciate the feedback! 
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