Fluffy_the_unicorn

Just had my very first insta fight . Well not a fight she called one of my comments rude and stupid when all I asked was 
          	Is that flour in his hair?
          	It was on a pic of this albino hair.
          	So I got mad and was going off on her because its a simple question and im dont process things as fast as others.
          	My dads nurses husbands friend is albino and he had white blotches on his head too but he was completely bald and the only albino ive seen in real life so how was i supposed to know the white blotches grow on your hair too damn

Fluffy_the_unicorn

Just had my very first insta fight . Well not a fight she called one of my comments rude and stupid when all I asked was 
          Is that flour in his hair?
          It was on a pic of this albino hair.
          So I got mad and was going off on her because its a simple question and im dont process things as fast as others.
          My dads nurses husbands friend is albino and he had white blotches on his head too but he was completely bald and the only albino ive seen in real life so how was i supposed to know the white blotches grow on your hair too damn

BabySheDevil

Just a heads up...it's best to stick to one pov throughout the entire book or write in third person if that doesn't work for you. Try avoiding time skips, and make sure you have enough words before you call it a chapter:)

BabySheDevil

But if there's a limit on the amount of words you can use then go by that.
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