To Writ3r7
Please read my late comment in The Mermaid's Wishing Well, as I believe it to be an exceptional story with an almost limitless amount of potential.
Unfortunately life gets in the road of reading so I apologise for this being late.
Although I haven't ever written a story before, I'm so intrigued by your story that if you wish to contact me definitely do, and I will help in which ever way that I can.