Hello, fellow Author!
I have read your Cyn Reader story. I must say, I gotta give it review.
Truth be told, Y/N here was abit. . .of an addition, over a character. Sure he had his moments and stuff, but he was abit. . .inconsistently consistent. He essentially played a neutral party.
While I love the idea of Reader/OC being their own party, and I certainly loved references and comedic reliefs, I just can't shake off the fact that YN only played a key role in specific moments, then returned to being a side-character. I am in firm belief that if we include a Reader, or an OC, they should have more time to explain their affiliations, ideals and stuff.
Props for having multiple endings, but I believe those should've been split into Post-Story entries. True ending should remains as is, but other endings should be certainly kept in an "extras" menu. Get me?
Certainly a good stories, it's just that some moments were abit stale, and good part of the story line was closer to copy and paste, with some moments being specifically.
Overall, solid story. Good 6.8/10. Not many do Cyn-reader type of story, and even lesser even bothering going off script further more than just one line.The idea and Y/N's character carried the positive experience, but lack of further unique interactions did ruin the experience for me.
This is not to say you shouldn't write! Hell fucki'n no my guy! Potential's there, just. . .tinker abit over the ideas, get me?
Regardless of anything, have a good day. Be Awesome, Stay Awesome and have an Awesome day.
