Ok thanks, I know I have tried to proofread and all, I will go back over, I'm glad you took the time to read it though and I appreciate the honesty, I will use your suggestions to make it better, thank :)
I read a few chapters and I seen a few spelling errors, also when you say she fears love can you put that into your book? I believe you should add more of a story to it. It was interesting in the beginning, but you need to keep surprising your readers with more. Over all it was great,keep up the good work.