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Hello everyone, I have been working really hard on a story called The Dying Sun, I don't do this often but I'd really appreciate it if you guys could give it a read and let me know how to improve!

Thanks for being my 1st follower!! I'm glad to have you on board! I know this is late but, Welcome to team @Rin_Chi_Hatake!!! Thanks for sticking with a inactive author such as myself! 〜ありがと、りん血畑( ^ω^ )

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